X-Men Movieverse Fan Fiction
I'm so happy your writing this. I love the fact Victor was so relieved he was going to kill her. It's wonderful how he's drawn to her not knowing why this is just as good as the other peice and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: lol. Good cause this bunny won\'t leave me alone. I\'ll be updating frequently whenever my kid lets me.
Wow is it wrong to be turned on by Victor yum. I thought you did a great job of showing the two parts that make him who he is. Glad he's finally woken up to himself, can't wait to read the rest tonight.
I went back and read this from the start and followed with hidden intent, they both flow into each other perfectly. The way that Victor is so upset over Logan pushing Rogue away shows how much Rhia has helped him grow. I loved that it was watching Rogue trip and Logan not helping her that upset Victor so much.
When reading hidden intent I almost felt the need to read this story scream at me and it didn't disapoint I'm just saddened it hasn't been reviewed more. As I've said before I love your o.c's, the way you make them as real as the charcters we know and love is you resist the need to make them perfect with no flaws.I never thought Victor would be such a great leading man. I don't really have the words to say how much I've loved this. Can't wait to see what you write next.
Author's Response: Thanks! My characters mean a great deal to me. I tend to dream them, almost literally, Morgan and Rhiannon came to me in dreams. Donella is based off a gaming character I played for years. To me they are real. I\'m just glad they feel real to you as well. I\'m trying to come up with a new story line which will prolly get written for this site, it might take a bit though. Thanks for reviewing!
Both Laura and Lea are great. Not such a Hank fan but as always this is a well written piece can't wait to see where it goes from here. Really don't want Hank turned into a puppet sorry I haven't reviewed before this but life gets really crazy sometimes and a fix of your writing is a great way to relax after a night-shift.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoy my work. Hank is a difficult character to write, he comes out OOC when I write him. Inside info for ya since you reviewed. He doesn\'t become a puppet. He does get a little feral though. Keep reading!
I loved tis story from Hank going to Logan for advice, Rogue tricking into thinking she was Laura and a happy ending. I don't seem to have the warm fuzzy feelings everyone else seems to have for Hank but I really liked him in this great job thats why your one of my favourite authors and your really great o.c's
Author's Response: Much as I love Hank he\'s a mold character, he has to grow on you before you can truely come to love him. It was years of reading the comic books before I loved his character. Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you liked it.