Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed
Date: 04/25/2007
Title: Chapter 1: Kitty and Marie
Sweetie...this is just constructive criticism....
'throw' is what you do with a baseball; 'through' is how you look out a window
'seed' is something you put in the ground to get a plant; 'said' is the past tense of say
'stranded' is what you are after a ship sinks and you're the only one on an island; 'stood' is the past tense of stand
'Kitties' is plural-more than one Kitty; Kitty's means something that belongs to Kitty
I'd be happy to beta for ya! ^_-