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Real name: Kelly
Member Since: 04/24/2007
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Reviews by ct_xfan
Marie knows Booby likes Kitty.



Rated: G
Categories: X3, AU
Characters: Kitty Pryde, Rogue
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 809 - Hits: 758
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/17/2007 - Last Updated: 03/17/2007
Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed
Date: 04/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kitty and Marie

Sweetie...this is just constructive criticism....

'throw' is what you do with a baseball; 'through' is how you look out a window
'seed' is something you put in the ground to get a plant; 'said' is the past tense of say
'stranded' is what you are after a ship sinks and you're the only one on an island; 'stood' is the past tense of stand
'Kitties' is plural-more than one Kitty; Kitty's means something that belongs to Kitty

I'd be happy to beta for ya! ^_-