X-Men Movieverse Fan Fiction
I read this story and learn many things from your stuff. I come to know that interest is very important for getting the attention of readers. It is recommended to get superiorpapers discount for building interest in your stories just like this one :)
I went back and read this from the start and followed with hidden intent, they both flow into each other perfectly. The way that Victor is so upset over Logan pushing Rogue away shows how much Rhia has helped him grow. I loved that it was watching Rogue trip and Logan not helping her that upset Victor so much.
When reading hidden intent I almost felt the need to read this story scream at me and it didn't disapoint I'm just saddened it hasn't been reviewed more. As I've said before I love your o.c's, the way you make them as real as the charcters we know and love is you resist the need to make them perfect with no flaws.I never thought Victor would be such a great leading man. I don't really have the words to say how much I've loved this. Can't wait to see what you write next.
Author's Response: Thanks! My characters mean a great deal to me. I tend to dream them, almost literally, Morgan and Rhiannon came to me in dreams. Donella is based off a gaming character I played for years. To me they are real. I'm just glad they feel real to you as well. I'm trying to come up with a new story line which will prolly get written for this site, it might take a bit though. Thanks for reviewing!
Wow is it wrong to be turned on by Victor yum. I thought you did a great job of showing the two parts that make him who he is. Glad he's finally woken up to himself, can't wait to read the rest tonight.
Yeah-- the back story! Thanks for writing this. I was intrigued by Rhiannon, and her relationship with Victor, when I read your story over on WRFA. I could feel in that story the tug toward Rhiannon and Victor (and away from Logan and Rogue), and so it's great to be able to read something purely about them. Keep posting! I'll be checking obsessively. :) Oh-- quick question. Is there anything that Rhiannon's mutation won't allow her to do?
Author's Response: She cannot bring the dead back to life, she can't make people do what she wills and she can't go forward in time only backwards and to the present. I think there are a few others but I haven't really picked it apart yet. Lately my stories tend to tug away from Logan and Rogue and I'm truly sorry about that. Hense my story here where I can really focus on the two I want to. We all know how Logan and Rogue will end up almost every time on the WRFA. With an OC and an established character it's different.
I'm so happy your writing this. I love the fact Victor was so relieved he was going to kill her. It's wonderful how he's drawn to her not knowing why this is just as good as the other peice and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: lol. Good cause this bunny won't leave me alone. I'll be updating frequently whenever my kid lets me.