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Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2007 12:28:24 PM Title: Kitty and Marie

Sweetie...this is just constructive criticism....

'throw' is what you do with a baseball; 'through' is how you look out a window
'seed' is something you put in the ground to get a plant; 'said' is the past tense of say
'stranded' is what you are after a ship sinks and you're the only one on an island; 'stood' is the past tense of stand
'Kitties' is plural-more than one Kitty; Kitty's means something that belongs to Kitty

I'd be happy to beta for ya! ^_-

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